Friday, 26 September 2014

e-mail to the teacher


Original e-mail:

Dear Sònia, my name is Albert Font and I'm 16 years old, on November 17. I'm studying batxillerat.

I'm so much lazy, I had never studied before, but this year I want good mark. If I have a good mark in 1 St and 2nd of batxillerat, I'll go to university. If I don't have good marks I'll go work.

I like to read, play computer games and leave with friends. I don't like arts and I don't like to do long projects for school.

This is so much shorter than 100 words but I don't know anything more to say then I finish the e-mail here.


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New e-mail

Dear Sònia,

my name is Albert Font and I'm 16 years old, on November 17. I live in Vilamacolum, a little village near to St. Pere Pescador. I'm studying science batxillerat in INS Castelló d'empúries.

Last years I had never studied because I'm so much lazy, but this year I want to have a good mark. Depending of the marks, I'll continue next year to second and then to the university. If I don't pass exams or I pass it with bad marks, I'll go work.

My hobbies are playing computer, read and hang out with friends on our motorbikes. I don't have favorite subjects but I can say the subjects I like less are Arts and Esports.