Original e-mail:
Dear Sònia, my name is Albert Font and I'm 16 years old, on November 17. I'm studying batxillerat.
I'm so much lazy, I had never studied before, but this year I want good mark. If I have a good mark in 1 St and 2nd of batxillerat, I'll go to university. If I don't have good marks I'll go work.
I like to read, play computer games and leave with friends. I don't like arts and I don't like to do long projects for school.
This is so much shorter than 100 words but I don't know anything more to say then I finish the e-mail here.
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New e-mail
Dear Sònia,
my name is Albert Font and I'm 16 years old, on November 17. I live in Vilamacolum, a little village near to St. Pere Pescador. I'm studying science batxillerat in INS Castelló d'empúries.
Last years I had never studied because I'm so much lazy, but this year I want to have a good mark. Depending of the marks, I'll continue next year to second and then to the university. If I don't pass exams or I pass it with bad marks, I'll go work.
My hobbies are playing computer, read and hang out with friends on our motorbikes. I don't have favorite subjects but I can say the subjects I like less are Arts and Esports.
